protfoli task 4

Should children be raised to co-operate or to compete?

 

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. The other believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults, in this essay I will my point of view.

 

The reason that I think cooperation is better is the society needs people who are willing and able to work with others. This is because team work is very important in many things today like jobs or projects. Teaching the children cooperation will make them into responsible and they will be willing to share their knowledge, skills with their family and friends. I’m a banker some time we need to work as group in the branch to achieve some of our goals.   

 

However, there also arguments in favor of encouraging competition among children. The society needs leaders to drive us to the top. Entrepreneurs are people who rise to the top by being competitive and they create jobs for other people. In this world people need to compete in order to succeed. Competition is good but we should teach the children to use it in the good way and don’t make any impact on other.

 

In conclusion, competition and cooperation are both good but we should teach it for children in a good way and how to improve it. The most important thing is use it in the right way and try to make it positive thing in the children 

 

 

 

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